Monday, 10 January 2011

Camp Harmony Question 5

From the beginning, when they were on the bus, they were all nervous, worry and missed their home because they had to leave without any reasons.
At the end, they all felt uncomfortable because there were imprisoned. They had to live in a small place and they had no freedom.

4 comments:

  1. You can answer the question that how they feel. Your answer is good, you explain their feeling.

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  2. Your explain quite descripe their feeling but it would be better if you add some info from the text.

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  3. There is still a lot of feeling that they felt in the story, i think you should write more about it.

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  4. I disagree with others. Your answer is short but very descriptive. You use lots of adjectives that well-described the feelings of the Japanese

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