This advertisement is about beer but I'm not clear about how this advertisement is related about beer. This advertisement is lack of focusing to the main topic. I know this advertisement is beer until I heard the last sentences. But the talking of this advertisement is very clear. Beer is usually for TV advertisement so it is quite a hard one to do. Beer is definitely for adults.
You should focus on one topic and talk about it. It was hard to understand because you talked about many things. Your voice was clear and the volume was good.
This advertisement is about beer but I'm not clear about how this advertisement is related about beer. This advertisement is lack of focusing to the main topic. I know this advertisement is beer until I heard the last sentences. But the talking of this advertisement is very clear. Beer is usually for TV advertisement so it is quite a hard one to do. Beer is definitely for adults.
ReplyDeleteYou should focus on one topic and talk about it. It was hard to understand because you talked about many things. Your voice was clear and the volume was good.
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